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PostSubject: Kiyomi Saito | Akatsuki Member   Thu Apr 07, 2011 2:58 pm

General Information



Name: Kiyomi Saito ( 斎藤清美, Saito Kiyomi)
Nickname/Alias: “the Whisper in the Storm” ( 嵐の中でささやく, Whisper in the Storm)
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Looks: Kiyomi is easily recognizable if one has seen her before. Her trademark features would be her long white hair and her unusual crimson red eyes, marking her as a member of the Saito Clan. Her pale hair reaches down to mid back, while her bangs are more to her left side because of the part in her hair. She normally wears her hair loose, but on occasion she can be seen with it up in a messy bun (only when concentrating intensely hard). She is obviously young and she stands at five foot four inches. Her body is slim and lightweight, and she has very agile movements. [She is normally wearing what is shown in the picture above]. Her Konohagakure no Kuni forehead protector remains on her forehead, although the strike through the symbol is good enough evidence to show her status against Konoha. The coat she normally wears has a variety of places she can keep her ninja tools and equipment, including her various scrolls.

Kiyomi holds herself highly, and she does not like to be talked down upon. Her expression is normally one of superiority. Outside of battle, she is a respectable individual who holds herself quite highly. Her clan symbol is tattooed on the nape of the back of her neck, and is also displayed through her gloves, which both are emblazoned with her clan’s symbol as well as a few summoning seals on the palms of her gloves. She almost always has a stick of pocky in her mouth, looking to some like just a mere toothpick, while most would recognize it as the sweet Japanese treat. On the left side of her abdomen, 昊(Sora) is tattooed in a crimson color, looking like bloody lettering.
Personality: For the most part, Kiyomi is a very introverted person. She keeps to herself for the most part, and she doesn’t like sharing things with anyone, although she won’t hesitate to deny any kind of positive association with Konohagakure no Kuni. However, for the most part, Kiyomi is quite relaxed and calm. Her main characteristics are her cunning, deceptive nature and her calm, collective manner. At first glance she seems like an innocent enough young girl, but they could soon find out that she is quite the opposite. She can be quite sarcastic, and is annoyed easily if someone is purposefully using a humorous personality. This is especially so when she is already in a foul mood.

However, in battle she proves to be quite a complex opponent. She can think quickly and usually concentrates solely on her opponent(s) and the battle at hand. She cannot easily be swayed away from a battle once it has already begun, and she can become a bit persistent. Even so, she knows her levels and has enough common sense to know when to withdraw from a battle.
Likes:
  • Potential- If Kyomi sees potential in young people, particularly children and young adults, she can’t help but take a small liking to them. She is a good judge of character, and potential is something she can see immediately after meeting someone. Of course, she only likes those with particularly high potential rather than just potential in general.
  • Stormy and Rainy Weather- Her clan’s native land of Amegakure definitely rubbed off on their descendants. Not only do stormy weather increase the power of her Storm Release jutsu, but the rain also seems to have a calming effect on Kiyomi whenever she travels in it. It keeps her level-headed and less temperamental.
  • Cooperative People- Well, who doesn’t like cooperative people? They make everything run easily and smoothly, and without complication.
  • Pocky- It is quite rare that you’d ever see her without a small stick of pocky sticking out between her lips. She opts to pocky instead of smoking and drinking like some people do, although she does drink every once in a while, despite her young age.

Dislikes:
  • Disrespect- Kiyomi’s young age does often cause her to be underestimated and talked down upon. These actions towards her just infuriate her, so it’s unwise for anyone to disrespect her in any way whatsoever. She has raised herself to be a rather respectful individual on her own, so she can’t stand others who can’t use the same level of respect.
  • Konohagakure- After her clan’s destruction, Kyomi had blamed Konohagakure for not aiding her clan in its weakened state, believing that if they had assisted her family and clan would have survived. This belief of hers is probably true, anyhow. She has since vowed revenge on Konohagakure and has a plan to one day destroy the village in its entirety. She takes an immediate dislike to all Konoha shinobi, too.
  • Losing & Failure- This is rather self-explanatory.

Catch Phrase: “The coming of a storm may not predict certain death, but in this case it certainly encourages your's.”



Clan Information

Clan Name: the Saito Clan
Kekkei Genkai: the ability to use Storm Release (嵐遁, Ranton) by combining Lightning Release and Water Release | normally can learn high-level techniques at young ages
Clan Symbol:
Spoiler:
 

Clan Jutsu:
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Clan History: The Saito clan was once native to Amegakure, where their Storm Release techniques were legendary. Upon the wars of the shinobi, however, the Saito clan soon came to side with Konohagakure, where their shinobi, from that point on, would serve. Their clan had their own establishment located very nearby the village, but not exactly inside the village. Their clan town was very much like the Hyūga and Uchiha clan villages, which were dedicated to only their own clan members.

The Saito clan became very associated with Konohagakure, and although they were not technically native to their shinobi village, they proved to be very trustworthy and worthwhile. Many of the clan’s members ended up reaching high ranks in Konoha, many becoming jōnin and even ANBU-level shinobi. The Saito clan was not composed of many people, though, and they never had more than ten or twelve members those days. Many of them had died off with Amegakure, but the remaining of the clan proved worthwhile shinobi.

Upon the last few years, tension had been building all over the shinobi world, so an attack on any village or clan was not out of the ordinary. However, when the Saito Clan of Konoha was attacked, it was quite unexpected. Half of the already low-numbered clan died fighting off those that attacked the Saito clan. They did not manage to completely kill off the attackers, though, and the unidentified attackers managed to escape. The remaining of the Saito clan begged Konohagakure for extra protection, seeing as the Hidden Leaf still would not allow them to live in Konoha. The request was denied, although the Hokage at the time did send their apologies, but the village was too important to sacrifice any guards as of then. The following night, with the Saito clan still on edge, their clan was annihilated by a second attack, and by the time the Leaf Ninja had arrived, only one member of the Saito Clan was still alive, and the attackers had fled.

The only surviving member of the Saito Clan is currently Kiyomi Saito.


Rank Information
Country: Ex-Konohagakure no Kuni
Village Rank: Akatsuki Member
Skill Rank: S-Rank


Skill Information
Skill Specialty:
Main: Fūinjutsu
Sub: Ninjutsu & Medical Justu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Raiton (Lightning)
Sub: Suiton (Water)
Clan KKG: Ranton (Storm)

Special Characteristics:
  • Weather Shifts- Kiyomi can tell from slight changes in the wind/temperature and other aspects of nature if the weather may change soon. For example, she’d be able to tell if a storm is coming in from the breeze or the sky, even if the sky’s color is nearly clear as day.
  • Skilled Chakra Control- Kiyomi’s ability when it comes to chakra control is incredible. She uses many jutsu that require intense skill in chakra control, and her clan’s ability to master difficult things quite quickly did come in handy. Intense training in the medical field is another reason she is so skilled in this area.
  • High Chakra Levels- Even for an S-rank ninja, she has quite an abnormally large amount of chakra, although it’s nowhere near Kisame’s levels, but it is still quite large. This is due to her clan’s intensity. The fact that her clan can master high-level techniques at young ages is normally because some of their clan members are naturally born with high chakra levels, but they don’t all manage to reach their full potential. Kiyomi has reached the level where she recognizes and can use her chakra to its fullest (nearly 130% that of a normal shinobi).

Flaws/Weaknesses:
  • Temper- Kiyomi has quite a temper on her hands, for she is still quite young and rather naïve. Her temper is one of the childish behaviours she never got rid of, and she can be easily baited into a fight if the opponent is insulting her, her skill, her clan, and/or other things as well.
  • Hand-to-Hand Combat- Kiyomi is horrible when it comes to most taijutsu and especially when battling taijutsu opponents. Given, she would be able to block simple punches, kicks, etc., she would not be able to defend herself very well if her opponent was a taijutsu master and used their skill against her.
  • Fear of [Close-Range] Firearms- Kiyomi has an intense fear of guns and most firearms. This fear is so great that she would immediately tense at the mere sight of a gun, and she'd completely freeze if a gun were pointed at her from within a 15 foot radius. She would be incapable of moving from the spot until the weapon was either discarded or just moved away, and she'd maybe start to hyperventilate. Even when the gun is removed, her legs would give in once the firearms was no longer a threat, and she'd be shaking uncontrollably. It'd take her at least five minutes to fully recover, and once she had, she'd probably remain mute and unresponsive to the calls of others for the next half hour. She has no reasonable explanation for this fear, except that it has been a fear of hers ever since she was a mere child.


Items/Weapons:

  • Kunai Knives
  • Shuriken Holster w/ Shuriken
  • Concealed Mouth Embers
  • Medical Pouch
  • Wire
  • MANY Scrolls
  • Black Marker
  • Smoke Pellets
  • Explosive Tags
  • Chakra Seal Tags
  • Konohagakure no Kuni Forehead Protector




Jutsu:
Clan Jutsu:
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Fūinjutsu:
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Ninjutsu:
Elemental Ninjutsu:
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Non-Elemental Ninjutsu:
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Medical Jutsu:
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Basic Jutsu:
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Background Information
History:
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RP Sample: If my history was not a good enough sample, the sample below is from a Harry Potter RPG site, and I’m role-playing as a professor >.<
Spoiler:
 


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PostSubject: Re: Kiyomi Saito | Akatsuki Member   Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:03 pm

Name: Fukkatsu Saseru (Revive)
Rank: A
Type: Medical Jutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: Kiyomi places all five fingers on a [dead] human's chest and then, using the lightning nature, they send an extremely thin line of lightning through their fingertips through the veins/arteries that lead to the heart. This could effectively bring back someone back to life once their heart has stopped beating, acting like a defibrillator. It can be used multiple times in attempts to restart the heart’s beating and revive the victim. This jutsu requires immense chakra control, and it can only work if the victim’s heart stopped beating less than half an hour ago

NO. half an hour is too long

Name: Chintsuuzai no Jutsu (Painkilling Technique)
Rank: A
Type: Medical Jutsu
Element: ---
Description: This jutsu requires intense chakra control, since the basic function if shutting down the nerve functions in a given area. After a small number of handseals, the user places their hand over an area that is in severe pain, and transfer their chakra to shut down the signal coming from the wounded area to the brain. Thus rendering the area 'painless' to work with.

if you stopped the nerve endings, the brain would not be able to move said area...

Name: Saikan Chūshutsu no Jutsu (Delicate Illness Extraction Technique)
Rank: B
Type: Medical Jutsu
Element: ---
Description: When a person has been afflicted by a pathogen or toxin, this medical ninjutsu can be used to draw out the agent and heal the damage. The cause of the illness is first determined by perceiving disturbances in the patient's chakra. Then, using a Chakra Scalpel, an incision is made near the affected part. Using their chakra, the medical-nin pushes a large volume of a medicinal fluid through the incision. The fluid then draws the poison out of the affected part(s) and serves as a medium through which the poison is suspended and then forced out of the person's body. This technique thus removes the poison, while simultaneously repairing the damage caused by the poison.
After the agent is drawn out, it can be used to create an antidote or medicine after it has been analyzed. This can then be given to the patient to ensure a complete recovery. This technique requires the utmost care and ability in diagnosis, incising and unmatched chakra control. Therefore, it is considered an extremely difficult technique, even among medical ninjutsu.

illness does not affect the chakra.....

Name: Sairento Kiringu (Soundless Murder Technique)
Rank: D
Type: ---
Element: ---
Description: As the name suggests, this technique is simply a very quiet method of killing an opponent, usually from behind with a blade. Additionally, because the user is very silent, it cannot be defended against. The user will often slit their opponent's throat, preventing any cry that might give them away. This is usually used in conjunction with something that will prevent the victim from seeing the user as well.

Banned~

Name: Raiton: Hiraishin (Lightning Release: Flying Thunder God)
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton (Lightning)
Description: After coming into physical contact with the opponent, the user raises their arm into the air, generating a powerful bolt of electricity which will travel through their body into the body of the opponent.

You need permission to have this.......

Name: Suishū Gorugon (Powerful Blasting Rain Trench)
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: This technique will summon a large amount of water that will then be used to strike at the opponent in several versatile ways. The water used will be stationary till it is sent offensively toward the opponent.

Specify how....

Name: Rakurai (Lightning Strike)
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ranton (Storm)
Description: Using the Storm Release element, once a storm has brewed, the user of this jutsu can direct lightning, and do so without a conductor like a sword that most lightning users require. This requires quite an amount of chakra.

This is too much like Kirin and it is Banned....
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PostSubject: Re: Kiyomi Saito | Akatsuki Member   Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:06 pm

Quote:
Name: Raiton: Hiraishin (Lightning Release: Flying Thunder God)
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton (Lightning)
Description: After coming into physical contact with the opponent, the user raises their arm into the air, generating a powerful bolt of electricity which will travel through their body into the body of the opponent.



This is not banned this is fuka Flying Thunder God Not Minatos
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PostSubject: Re: Kiyomi Saito | Akatsuki Member   Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:20 pm

Fixed
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PostSubject: Re: Kiyomi Saito | Akatsuki Member   Tue Apr 12, 2011 12:26 am

Name: Saikan Chūshutsu no Jutsu (Delicate Illness Extraction Technique)
Rank: B
Type: Medical Jutsu
Element: ---
Description: When a person has been afflicted by a pathogen or toxin, this medical ninjutsu can be used to draw out the agent and heal the damage. The cause of the illness is first determined by an overall examination. Then, using a Chakra Scalpel, an incision is made near the affected part. Using their chakra, the medical-nin pushes a large volume of a medicinal fluid through the incision. The fluid then draws the poison out of the affected part(s) and serves as a medium through which the poison is suspended and then forced out of the person's body. This technique thus removes the poison, while simultaneously repairing the damage caused by the poison.
After the agent is drawn out, it can be used to create an antidote or medicine after it has been analyzed. This can then be given to the patient to ensure a complete recovery. This technique requires the utmost care and ability in diagnosis, incising and unmatched chakra control. Therefore, it is considered an extremely difficult technique, even among medical ninjutsu.

this should be an A rank tech

Name: Fūjutsu Kyūin (Blocking Technique Absorption Seal)
Rank: S
Type: Fūinjutsu/Ninjutsu
Element: ---
Description: A highly advanced sealing technique that is capable of absorbing any chakra, regardless of any shape or nature transformation, and dispersing it within one's body by spinning the chakra within one's body in the opposite direction. As a result, this technique can absorb any ninjutsu based technique, regardless of power, without harming the user. Should the user get close enough to grab the opponent, the barrier can absorb chakra right out of an individual's body, effectively draining them.

This is a banned jutsu.....

Name: Suishū Gorugon (Powerful Blasting Rain Trench)
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: This technique will summon a large amount of water that will then be used to strike at the opponent in several versatile ways. The water used will be stationary till it is sent offensively toward the opponent

specify how it can be utilized

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PostSubject: Re: Kiyomi Saito | Akatsuki Member   Tue Apr 12, 2011 1:43 pm

High Chakra Level
About how much more chakra do you have than normal with 100% being the normal.

Edit: Also your flaws don't match up in equality with your strengths. Either remove all but 2 strengths or add flaws so that the two are equal.
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PostSubject: Re: Kiyomi Saito | Akatsuki Member   Tue Apr 12, 2011 5:48 pm

Updated with Changes
Sorry about all of these mistakes and what-not >.<
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PostSubject: Re: Kiyomi Saito | Akatsuki Member   Tue Apr 12, 2011 6:01 pm

Try as I might can't find anything wrong here....go figure. lol

Sabure Approved.
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